So you must be sturdy. You are capable of coping with any difficulty. Please feel in touch with the world out of your window. You can smell my breath in the fresh air. You can see my childlike smile through the sunshine. You can hear my mild calling from the song of a lovely bird.
Remember: keep a beautiful mind. I will pray for you everyday, and my heart will go with you wherever you are.
简 评
世界上什么最珍贵?人与人之间的温情、友情和爱情总能战胜一切黑暗和烦恼——正如作者在心情灰暗、寂寞孤独的时候，一首温情的小诗给她带来了光明，带来了希望，让她体会到只要有感情的存在，一切都是可以战胜的。
本文以第一、第二人称写作，给人印象深刻。另外作为心情感言，作者在描写心情时婉婉道来，用词典雅，如：“Before I met you，I thought the sky was gray．．．How many times I attempted，there was still a strong force which constrained me．．．I really tasted the flavor of‘loneliness．’”等。
温馨的文笔，感人的描述使本文值得一读。
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