A nice sunny afternoon would suddenly turn out to be a doomsday for me when the teacher announced the date for us to take the long distance race test. Usually we＇re required to run 800 meters in 4 minutes, and any word about 800 or race can carry me away during the week before it. Though there＇s generally a bleak prospect ahead, I still cherish illusions about passing the test. I＇ll spend a whole night before the race trying hard to conceive a strategy that enables me to succeed in the test tomorrow.I＇ll try to put any suggestions from friends into execution. In a word, I＇m on the brink of falling apart. At last, I catch on why we think of the long distance race as a test on one＇s endurance.Involuntarily I keep on telling myself: Buck up ! Give it your best shot. You may fail the test but you can at lest console yourself with the thought that you＇ve tried your best! The point is that things aren＇t usually as bad as they seem to be. I＇m grateful to my friends. It was their friendship and encouragements that got me through these dark moments.
Taking into account all these factors, it seems I don＇t really dislike PE lessons. I believe destiny has willed it so. The experiences about PE lessons have become a part of my memory even though they are beyond my understanding sometimes.
简 评
这篇文章夹叙夹议、幽默生动。文章的成功之处在于其流畅、自然的语言，显示出作者较为扎实的英文基础。但本文更为突出的特色在于叙述和议论的成功的结合。为数不多的议论如画龙点睛之笔，转承启合的同时，风趣生动地刻画出作者面对体育课的尴尬与无奈。行文的语气颇有些英语本族语使用者的风格，尤其是下面这几句：my week both beelns and ends on that day．．．；Of course，I＇m not so naive as to believe that I＇m among the first group．．．；I did make a giant stride ln sports．．．；In a word，I＇m On the brink“falling apart．．．；it seems I don＇t really dislike PE lessons．．．显然作者常常阅读地道的英文作品，写作时才能不受母语影响，真正做到用英文思考，从而写出这样颇为地道的文章。
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